Sunday, June 24, 2012

How is narrative perspective shown in construction (introduction, main part, ending) so readers recognize narrative perspective of 1st or 3rd person?

This is a complex and interesting question because,
indeed, narrative perspective can change throughout a narrative. A contemporary popular
example of this is John le Carre's novels that change omniscient third person
perspective with virtually each chapter. What elements indicate the narrative
perspective in the introduction, the main part of the novel, and the
ending?

In the introduction the basic narrative perspective is set up.
The most common tools are tense and pronouns. For third person (omniscient and limited,
obtrusive and unobtrusive), the verb tenses are likely to be in some form of past tense,
either simple, past perfect or past progressive. An example of this is the introduction
of the story (Chapter II) to Tom Jones by Henry
Fielding:



In
that part ... called Somersetshire, there lately lived, and perhaps lives still, a
gentleman whose name was Allworthy, and who might well be called the favourite of both
nature and fortune;



The past
constructions here are called, lately lived, might be called. This
sets the narrative in the past and away from present time. A past tense narrative may
also be told from first person, so what marks them out as different narrative
perspectives? The use of pronouns will be different in the two. Later in the same
chapter of Tom Jones, indicative third person pronouns are
employed; you'll note his, he,
her
:


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had in his youth married a ... woman, of whom he
had been extremely fond: by her he had three children,
....



Compare this to the
first person narrative perspective of the introduction to David
Copperfield
by Charles Dickens and note the presence of the first pronoun
I and the possessive
my:


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Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my
own life, or whether that station will be held by anybody else, these pages must show.
To begin my life with the beginning of my life, I record that I was
born...



If we jump to the
ending and examine a story set in a frame, like Conrad’s Heart of
Darkness
, we'll see elements indicative of perspective in the ending. Note
the quotation marks used for the speaker who is telling the story within the story that
is being narrated by the frist person narrator ("I raised my
head"):


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"Hadn't he said he wanted only justice? But I
couldn't. ... It would have been too dark ...."

Marlow ceased, and sat
apart, .... Nobody moved for a time. "We have lost the first of the ebb," said the
Director, suddenly. I raised my
head.



So an element that
indicates perspective in the ending in the case of a frame story is quotation marks of
direct dialogue (in this example the dialogue happens to be the entire story and
contains its own internal dialogue). You'll also note tense and pronouns are continuing
elements.

In the main part of a narrative, there is more opportunity
for complexity but the elements of tense, pronouns and quotation marks of direct
dialogue remain constant indicative elements. At times, a narrative may change from
third to first person if the narrator relates a portion of the story through the words
of a first person participant. In that case, the embedded first person narrative would
be set off by an extended quotation as in Heart of Darkness or by a
narratorial indicator something like: “Then she said to me …” or “As he said in his own
words ….” A first person narrator can do the same by saying something like: “I'll let
her tell it in her own words.” These are some elements that indicate narrative
perspective throughout a narrative.

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