All of these reasons could be used to support the topic
sentence. You would need to organize them in such a way that they make
sense.
I would suggest that you mention each of the three
bullet points in its own sentence, giving an example or two. For example, your first
sentence could read something like "One of the major reasons that we won has to do with
our content, which includes excellent coverage of school news about such groups as our
sports teams and our clubs." Next, you could say that the content is enhanced by the
format and appearance of the paper. Finally, you could say that all of this is made
possible by a team effort. Please be sure to include transitions between your
sentences, saying things like "In addition to our excellent content, we also have an
appealing look to our paper."
If you do these things, you
should have a good paragraph.
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