In her poem "Jacklight," Louise Erdrich uses a number of
different literary devices to help contribute to the poem's meanings and effectiveness,
including the following:
- an
epigraph, as in the opening quotation from R. W. Dunning,
which helps explain the poem's title. - frequent use of
anaphora, or repetition of a word or phrase at the
beginnings of successive lines, as in the first four lines of the
poem:
We have come to the edge of the
woods,
out of the brown grass where we
slept, unseen,
out of knotted twigs,
out of leaves creaked shut,
out of
hiding. (italics added)
Such
phrasing helps give the poem a highly rhythmic quality and thus contributes to its
memorability.
- assonance,
or similar vowel sounds, as in the repeated "ou" sound in line 2 and the repeated "ee"
sound in the same
line. - alliteration, or
repetition of consonant sounds, as in the emphasis on "s" sounds in line 2. Both
assonance and alliteration
contribute to the music of the poem and thus to its
memorability. - repetition,
not only in the form of anaphora but even within lines, as in line
3. - metrical emphasis on initial
words, as in the repeated "out" of lines 2-4. In regular iambic meter,
the second syllable would be stressed (as in "rebel"; here
the first syllable is stressed (as in
"rebel"). - imagery
of nature, as in all the lines quoted above, which implies the speaker's
appreciation of beauty and which appeals to same sense in the
reader. - metaphor, in which a
comparison is implied rather than openly stated by use of the words "like" or "as" (as
in a simile). A metaphor appears in line 6 when the speaker mentions "a fist of light"
-- a phrase that implies the speaker's own inventiveness and sensitivity to
language. - lists of emphatic
verbs, as in lines 6-7, which describe how
light
. . .
pointed,
searched out, divided
us.
This technique again adds
to the emphatic rhythm of the poem and stress key
words.
- similes, in
which the speaker makes comparisons by using the words "like" or "as." A simile occurs,
for instance, in line 8 when the speaker mentions "beams like direct blows." Here again
the comparison implies the speaker's perceptiveness, sensitivity, and
inventiveness. - alternation of long and
short sentences, as in lines 8-9, so that the rhythm of the poem does not
become monotonous or predictable. - paradoxes
or oymorons, in which apparent opposites are combined, as in the
reference in line 11 to a "night sun." These devices help sustain interest in the poem
by surprising the reader and encouraging the reader to think in unconventional ways.
They also imply that the speaker is capable of such
thought. - onomatopoeia, in
which a word sounds like the thing or action it describes, as in the use of "cracked" in
line 20. - ambiguity, or
phrasing that seems unclear, suggestive, or provocative, as in line 18. Ambiguity
contributes to the mysteriousness of texts and encourages readers to try to decipher the
intended meaning, thus making poems more
intriguing. - irony, or some
kind of unepected disparity between two things, as in the shift of tone from peaceful in
stanza one to violent and threatening in stanza
four.
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