Dudley Randall’s “Ballad of Birmingham” can be compared
and contrasted to the traditional popular ballad “Sir Patrick Spens” in a number of
ways, particularly with regard to structure and themes. Relevant comparisons and
contrasts include the
following:
- CONTRAST:
“Sir Patrick Spens” is a longer poem, consisting of eleven stanzas rather
than eight. - COMPARISON AND CONTRAST:
Both poems feature four-line stanzas that rhyme, but whereas the “Spens”
stanzas rhyme a/b/a/b, the stanzas in Randall’s poem rhyme a/b/c/b. The “Spens” lines
alternate in length by the number of syllables as follows: 8/6/8/6. The number of
syllables per line in the first three stanzas of Randall’s poem are less regularly
predictable: 8/6/8/7, 8/7/8/7, 8/8/8/6.
- COMPARISON: Both poems
feature dialogue, particularly in their first two stanzas. In the first stanza someone
asks a question, and in the second stanza someone answers that question. Both poems
feature narrators who comment on the events the poems
depict. - CONTRAST: The
speaking characters in “Spens” are males; the speaking characters in Randall’s poem are
females. There are two speakers in Randall’s poem, but there are four in “Spens.”
- COMPARISON AND CONTRAST:
Both poems deal with the deaths of various persons, but whereas the
deaths in “Spens” are anticipated by some of the characters, the deaths in Randall’s
poem are not. The dead persons in “Spens” are adults who die after deciding to obey the
king’s orders; the dead persons in the Randall poem are children who make no choice to
put themselves in an obviously dangerous
situation. - COMPARISON: Both
poems feature references to the combs:
O, lang, lang may the ladies
stand,
Wi’ their gold kembs [combs] in their hair . . .
(“Spens,”
37-38)
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She has combed and brushed her night-dark hair,
And bathed rose petal sweet . . . (Randall,
17-18)
- COMPARISON:
Both poems deal with tragic
outcomes.
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